The strange adventure in the wood

Yesterday me and my friend Lydia and I were out walking in the woods when we saw a strange looking 
creature."Hello,"I whispered so quietly that nobody could hear me, not even Lydia who was only a few centimeters away from me."And whats your name?" asked the strange looking creature(who we found his name was Bramble Berry.)
 "M m my name is A A Abi"I mumbled.
"And my name is Lydia!" shouted Lydia butting in and talking to fast.
"What are you doing so deep in the wood?"wondered the creature.
"Well...hey hang on 

whats behind the door ?

"Hey look over there at that door" said Sally.

"should we open it?" Beth asked.

"ye" replied Sally.

"whose going to open the door?"asked Beth.

"I..... will" replied Sally . Creek creek the door went.

"AH .......Theirs a monster ..... run.

"Wait .....it looks sad should we stay here and comfit it" Beth said   

 

The Stick Man Mystery

The door creaked open to a Stick man with moss for hair."Who are you?"Asked Mulberry Blue.

"I am Canondoma,King of the forest!!!"Answered Conondoma.

                                         By Lydia

I had a shock

"creek" as the door opened.
"Aaahh, wh wh who are you?" I stammered.
"I'm Arcilike,who are you?" replied Arcilike.
"My name is Georgina,do you want to be friends?" I asked bravely.
"Ok" he answered.
By Georgina

More story openers

This time we decided to try and open a story with dialogue...here are some of our openers......

story openers

There is a tree monster who lies in the dark forest.The magical tree monster is  moving, go to the lake to catch frogs.A tree who lies in the dark forest, walks to the lake to catch frogs.By Alexia

There was a slimy green monster in the middle of a slimy green forest
and a little boy about to face his fear.