What a great piece of writing Laura. I wonder why this orange flower was so important and why the witch wanted it so much. Thank goodness you managed to catch the witch and drop her in the dungeon. I can see by your work that you have been through and edited it. This is a good skill to keep doing as it means you are trying to make your writing better. Keep up the super work. Mrs Prior
wow thats amazing
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ReplyDeleteHi miss blakeway thanks for putting my 1000 word challage on the blog from laura
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you put 1000wc not 100wc.
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What a great piece of writing Laura. I wonder why this orange flower was so important and why the witch wanted it so much. Thank goodness you managed to catch the witch and drop her in the dungeon. I can see by your work that you have been through and edited it. This is a good skill to keep doing as it means you are trying to make your writing better.
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Mrs Prior
amazing work you have there.you can improve by having less crossing out.:)
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