Thursday 8 November 2012

Our 5 minute fantastic poem

We wrote this fantastic poem together today in less than 5 minutes!!!!  It just shows what creative minds we have and that sometimes we don't have to spend ages working on something to make it good.....great minds working together!!!


Thursday 8th November
If my ears were the size of satellite dishes I could hear.........
The dolphins chattering in the Indian ocean....
The tiniest mouse squeaking in the North Pole...
A person from a million miles away...
I could hear....
A ladybird shuffling on a tiny leaf....
Santa in the night sky delivering his presents on the polar express....
My cousin in Australia munching on pot noodle..
The Dr travelling in space to a new dimension..
I could hear a cheetah chasing it's prey.....BUT..I never hear my mum ask me to tidy my room!!!!
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3 comments:

  1. lucy14 November 2012 at 08:50

    good wor
    It was fun




    love Lucy xxx

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  2. Acer Class20 November 2012 at 07:14

    This is a lovely poem, Oak Class. And even better because it only took you 5 minutes!! My class thought they might be able to hear a tiny ant marching or rain falling 100 miles away.

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  3. Liam H14 January 2013 at 07:48

    I really liked the poem!!!!

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