I had a shock

"creek" as the door opened.
"Aaahh, wh wh who are you?" I stammered.
"I'm Arcilike,who are you?" replied Arcilike.
"My name is Georgina,do you want to be friends?" I asked bravely.
"Ok" he answered.
By Georgina

More story openers

This time we decided to try and open a story with dialogue...here are some of our openers......

story openers

There is a tree monster who lies in the dark forest.The magical tree monster is  moving, go to the lake to catch frogs.A tree who lies in the dark forest, walks to the lake to catch frogs.By Alexia

There was a slimy green monster in the middle of a slimy green forest
and a little boy about to face his fear.

    I   was in my  swamp  buggy when  suddenly  a big monster jumped up   . It made  me  jump  out of my seat!  By George and Jaden

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In the dark, gloomy forest a mysterious monster who was once an old man who died from a strange affliction wondered about in the creepy forest waiting for his next victim and haunting the nearby city people with his dastredly groan of sadness.The people who are foolish enough to stroll into into the depths of the tradgic curtain of sorrow were never heard or seen from again!!!........By Lily and Ellie May

story operners

It was a gloomy night in the green, misty, spooky forest of spikeville.  The king of spike walked down the stoney path.
In the spooky forest there lived a tree man that lost all his branches and cut down every single tree he saw but who was he?  By Ella and Alice