Friday, 21 June 2013

I had a shock

"creek" as the door opened.
"Aaahh, wh wh who are you?" I stammered.
"I'm Arcilike,who are you?" replied Arcilike.
"My name is Georgina,do you want to be friends?" I asked bravely.
"Ok" he answered.
By Georgina
Posted by at 01:54

2 comments:

  1. Mrs Prior21 June 2013 at 01:58

    Hi Georgina,
    What a great idea to begin your story with speech. This introduces your character straight away. I like some of your vocabulary such as 'stammered'. Well done.
    Mrs P

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  2. Anonymous22 June 2013 at 00:07

    Well done Georgina, fantastic opening to your story, your choice of vocabulary is very good. Very proud of you.
    Joe Hirst (Dad)

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