It was a gloomy night in the green, misty, spooky forest of spikeville. The king of spike walked down the stoney path.
In the spooky forest there lived a tree man that lost all his branches and cut down every single tree he saw but who was he? By Ella and Alice
Hi Ella and Alice,
ReplyDeleteI like the Spike idea. I also like how you ended with a question to keep your reader interested. This feels almost like a blurb. I am desperate to find out who the tree man is now. Well done.
Mrs P