a golden creacher!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"Look at that golden creature," stared Lucy,"What is it?"

"I don't know,"replied Ella.

"Shill we go and ask it?"questioned Lucy.

"OK!.....lets run"called Ella!

"Hi,my name is Lucy....whats yours!?
"I don't havvvvvvve one" The monster said shyly.
"you poor thing, come with us!"
By Lucy

midnight stoll

Me and my friend Sam were taking a midnight stroll .Sam whispered "I don't feel right"
"where is your sence of adventurer " I replied. Suddenly we fell down a deep,deep hole coverd in sticicts.About ten seconds later a mysrerios creater  aperd  over the hole.  By max

the Monster of terror and shrieks

"This is spooky"whispered Lily.                                                                                                 "It is".I replied. "listen footsteps."                                                                                                                   Lily and I froze."Aghrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!"Lily shrieked.                                                                       "A thing" I screamed."My my my  name name is Mallificent."                               The silvery ladies voice bounced off the walls.Her fiery hair  bounced up and down as she shouted."u oh"I mumbled...

By Ellie May 

The strange adventure in the wood

Yesterday me and my friend Lydia and I were out walking in the woods when we saw a strange looking 
creature."Hello,"I whispered so quietly that nobody could hear me, not even Lydia who was only a few centimeters away from me."And whats your name?" asked the strange looking creature(who we found his name was Bramble Berry.)
 "M m my name is A A Abi"I mumbled.
"And my name is Lydia!" shouted Lydia butting in and talking to fast.
"What are you doing so deep in the wood?"wondered the creature.
"Well...hey hang on 

whats behind the door ?

"Hey look over there at that door" said Sally.

"should we open it?" Beth asked.

"ye" replied Sally.

"whose going to open the door?"asked Beth.

"I..... will" replied Sally . Creek creek the door went.

"AH .......Theirs a monster ..... run.

"Wait .....it looks sad should we stay here and comfit it" Beth said   

 

The Stick Man Mystery

The door creaked open to a Stick man with moss for hair."Who are you?"Asked Mulberry Blue.

"I am Canondoma,King of the forest!!!"Answered Conondoma.

                                         By Lydia

I had a shock

"creek" as the door opened.
"Aaahh, wh wh who are you?" I stammered.
"I'm Arcilike,who are you?" replied Arcilike.
"My name is Georgina,do you want to be friends?" I asked bravely.
"Ok" he answered.
By Georgina

More story openers

This time we decided to try and open a story with dialogue...here are some of our openers......

story openers

There is a tree monster who lies in the dark forest.The magical tree monster is  moving, go to the lake to catch frogs.A tree who lies in the dark forest, walks to the lake to catch frogs.By Alexia

There was a slimy green monster in the middle of a slimy green forest
and a little boy about to face his fear.

    I   was in my  swamp  buggy when  suddenly  a big monster jumped up   . It made  me  jump  out of my seat!  By George and Jaden

story openers

In the dark, gloomy forest a mysterious monster who was once an old man who died from a strange affliction wondered about in the creepy forest waiting for his next victim and haunting the nearby city people with his dastredly groan of sadness.The people who are foolish enough to stroll into into the depths of the tradgic curtain of sorrow were never heard or seen from again!!!........By Lily and Ellie May

story operners

It was a gloomy night in the green, misty, spooky forest of spikeville.  The king of spike walked down the stoney path.
In the spooky forest there lived a tree man that lost all his branches and cut down every single tree he saw but who was he?  By Ella and Alice
                                         

our story openers

We wrote some fantastic story openers using a picture as our stimulus....here are some