Me and my friend Sam were taking a midnight stroll .Sam whispered "I don't feel right"
"where is your sence of adventurer " I replied. Suddenly we fell down a deep,deep hole coverd in sticicts.About ten seconds later a mysrerios creater aperd over the hole. By max
I love this Max! I really get a feel for your characters in this very first part of your story. I can tell that Sam is apprehensive and that you are more adventurous. I can't wait to read more to find out about the mysterious creature.
ReplyDeleteWell done.
Mrs P