Welcome back

Hello Oak, welcome back after the summer...we're going to create a new blog very soon....look out for it!!!

a golden creacher!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"Look at that golden creature," stared Lucy,"What is it?"

"I don't know,"replied Ella.

"Shill we go and ask it?"questioned Lucy.

"OK!.....lets run"called Ella!

"Hi,my name is Lucy....whats yours!?
"I don't havvvvvvve one" The monster said shyly.
"you poor thing, come with us!"
By Lucy

midnight stoll

Me and my friend Sam were taking a midnight stroll .Sam whispered "I don't feel right"
"where is your sence of adventurer " I replied. Suddenly we fell down a deep,deep hole coverd in sticicts.About ten seconds later a mysrerios creater  aperd  over the hole.  By max

the Monster of terror and shrieks

"This is spooky"whispered Lily.                                                                                                 "It is".I replied. "listen footsteps."                                                                                                                   Lily and I froze."Aghrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!"Lily shrieked.                                                                       "A thing" I screamed."My my my  name name is Mallificent."                               The silvery ladies voice bounced off the walls.Her fiery hair  bounced up and down as she shouted."u oh"I mumbled...

By Ellie May 

The strange adventure in the wood

Yesterday me and my friend Lydia and I were out walking in the woods when we saw a strange looking 
creature."Hello,"I whispered so quietly that nobody could hear me, not even Lydia who was only a few centimeters away from me."And whats your name?" asked the strange looking creature(who we found his name was Bramble Berry.)
 "M m my name is A A Abi"I mumbled.
"And my name is Lydia!" shouted Lydia butting in and talking to fast.
"What are you doing so deep in the wood?"wondered the creature.
"Well...hey hang on 

whats behind the door ?

"Hey look over there at that door" said Sally.

"should we open it?" Beth asked.

"ye" replied Sally.

"whose going to open the door?"asked Beth.

"I..... will" replied Sally . Creek creek the door went.

"AH .......Theirs a monster ..... run.

"Wait .....it looks sad should we stay here and comfit it" Beth said   

 

The Stick Man Mystery

The door creaked open to a Stick man with moss for hair."Who are you?"Asked Mulberry Blue.

"I am Canondoma,King of the forest!!!"Answered Conondoma.

                                         By Lydia

I had a shock

"creek" as the door opened.
"Aaahh, wh wh who are you?" I stammered.
"I'm Arcilike,who are you?" replied Arcilike.
"My name is Georgina,do you want to be friends?" I asked bravely.
"Ok" he answered.
By Georgina

More story openers

This time we decided to try and open a story with dialogue...here are some of our openers......

story openers

There is a tree monster who lies in the dark forest.The magical tree monster is  moving, go to the lake to catch frogs.A tree who lies in the dark forest, walks to the lake to catch frogs.By Alexia

There was a slimy green monster in the middle of a slimy green forest
and a little boy about to face his fear.

    I   was in my  swamp  buggy when  suddenly  a big monster jumped up   . It made  me  jump  out of my seat!  By George and Jaden

story openers

In the dark, gloomy forest a mysterious monster who was once an old man who died from a strange affliction wondered about in the creepy forest waiting for his next victim and haunting the nearby city people with his dastredly groan of sadness.The people who are foolish enough to stroll into into the depths of the tradgic curtain of sorrow were never heard or seen from again!!!........By Lily and Ellie May

story operners

It was a gloomy night in the green, misty, spooky forest of spikeville.  The king of spike walked down the stoney path.
In the spooky forest there lived a tree man that lost all his branches and cut down every single tree he saw but who was he?  By Ella and Alice
                                         

our story openers

We wrote some fantastic story openers using a picture as our stimulus....here are some

Our afternoon with skeletons!!!

Hello everyone....here as promised are the photos from this afternoon.We all had to draw what we thought our skeleton looked like.We all knew we had ribs but not many of us knew where or how many.We all knew we had a skull , where it was and what it was called....the rest varied from group to group.......

Welcome back!!

Welcome back Oak...you've had a couple of weeks back in school now and you are working really hard....REMEMBER to make sure you are practising those times tables DIVSIONS ready for the timed tests on Fridays.  Also remember to get  3 comments written in your reading diary so you can get your housepoint on Fridays.

great 100 word challenges

Here they are at last.......some great 100 w/c from oak class. Here's Charlottes.....

Me and my friends worked so hard to make a massive meerkat for halloween. It was strong, tall and had a tail , much more but it's still not yet finished.My friends that helped me were Lilly, Sienna, Ellie and Lydia but all of us worked really hard.2 weeks went by and we had finally finished, now all we had to do was scare our class.It all went well carrying it down my street but then Ellie said 'Tomorrow's Halloween' GOOD JOB WE GOT IT TO SCHOOL!


Here's Ellies.......

One dark,Halloween in October, Ellie was walking steadily around the park dresses as a warty witch. All of a sudden she gave a loud shriek and ran like fire back to her friend Lilly's house.She stormed up the stairs where Abi, Charlotte, Lilly, Sienna and Lydia were waiting for her impatiently " guess what I saw?" gasped Ellie, Lydia giggled...'maybe a wart dropping off a witch2 suggested Abi mockingly.
"no a 54 foot monster, his spine was as big as a train!" "Let's investigate whispered Charlotte.So they crept off into the dark night air."theeey!!!!!!" yowled Abi.......

Here's Beths........

This is what me and my eight friends have made.We all got up one Saturday morning and went down to the tip.We asked the manager if he would get a digger in the junk, he refused to get a digger down the dirty, smelly tip so we went to the Welshpool tip.We eventually found where the tip was in Welshpool. We went straight to the manager, he was more than happy that we asked for rubbish.He had a dirty digger down in a jiffy.So there we were with a boot ooad of rubbish ready to start.

Our 5 minute fantastic poem

We wrote this fantastic poem together today in less than 5 minutes!!!!  It just shows what creative minds we have and that sometimes we don't have to spend ages working on something to make it good.....great minds working together!!!

Thursday 8th November

If my ears were the size of satellite dishes I could hear.........

The dolphins chattering in the Indian ocean....

The tiniest mouse squeaking in the North Pole...

A person from a million miles away...

I could hear....

A ladybird shuffling on a tiny leaf....

Santa in the night sky delivering his presents on the polar express....

My cousin in Australia munching on pot noodle..

The Dr travelling in space to a new dimension..

I could hear a cheetah chasing it's prey.....BUT..I never hear my mum ask me to tidy my room!!!!

Have a safe and lovely holiday children see you all on Tuesday 6th November x